Write about the following topic:
Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
The concept of vegetarianism is spreading in every part of the world. Many people are opting to become vegetarians nowadays mainly to improve their health and also to maintain a balance in the ecosystem. I totally agree with this statement as one must eat good and stop animal killing.
Firstly, eating green leafy food and pulses is healthy as they are easy to digest. Our digestive system takes almost two to three weeks to digest a plate of meat or fish when compared to vegetarian foods which takes only hours to fully digest it. This would automatically improve one's health thereby leading towards good lifestyle changes. Common problems such as diabetes, thyroid and blood pressure will be controlled and people would enjoy a better life as this would also make their immune system healthy. A recent study suggested that ninety percent of people who consume non-vegetarian food suffer from high blood pressure cases.
Secondly, having vegetarian food would help to achieve a balance in the society. This means that nobody would eat meat therefore there will be no animal killing as we are unaware of the unknown substances that might be present in the meat. For example, a group of people in Wuhan consumed meat which gave rise to corona virus that spread around the world like a wildfire. Because of this, pandemic began and the whole world came to a stand still hampering the balance. Travelling was banned and people locked themselves up in their homes.
To conclude, im my opinion everyone should opt to become vegetarian as this would help them live a healthy life. Moreover, this world would become a better place to live in if there will be harmony between humans and nature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91637630662 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42194116905 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616724738676 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.834534665 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200599540822 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064727164766 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310701974658 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121707698426 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273497678763 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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