Write about the following topic. Some people think that buildings such as flats and houses should be designed to last a long time. Others believe that it is more important to provide accommodation quickly and cheaply. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Because the population is rapidly increasing these days, more and more houses are required. Some communities with high income or enough savings to design or purchase high-quality, long-lasting housing. Meanwhile, others are simply looking for low-cost dwellings. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give my own opinions.
On the one hand, many accommodations are carefully designed by architects for a long time and it has a unique style. The obvious is that a great facility constructed with strong raw materials usually makes an impressive feeling for occupants. However, people need to compensate much more money to own them. Huge investments result in a more comfortable lifestyle with fewer problems. For example, if a host wishes to design a good house, the hosts and architects must devote more time and money. As a result, they don’t need to move house and repair often.
On the other hand, some people prefer to live in a cheap home with a quick construction process. Because they have a low income or simply want to live in a normal house. It saves a lot of time building and designing so they can move in sooner. Furthermore, the cheap accommodation is suitable for everyone, especially workers, students and people with low income. Although the housing may be cramped, it can provide a safe place to live.
To sum up, I believe that both long-lasting buildings and cheap accommodation also have many benefits for people. But if you have enough money, buy a high-quality house which is likely to be better, if not, buy a cheap one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, well, while, for example, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95057034221 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83931399153 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619771863118 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.4356056612 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.5882352941 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4705882353 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25987631976 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756737758448 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468328539219 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152532443109 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359912028404 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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