Write about the following topic.
Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays the computer has become a household device and an integral part of our life. We are in an era where the elderly still find this tool an alien, middle-age people are comfortable and children are being proficient using the device. This is an important and effective tool and has to play to an important role in growth of future generation of the world. Hence, in my view computer can be modern-era tool which can help children in numerous ways.
Firstly, school-going children can use this device to support their academics. With rapid changing technology, more and more schools are now giving homework and assignments through an online portal. Children need to use the computer to complete their tasks. School going kids can use computer to research on new topics and take reference to broaden their knowledge. For example, nowadays its very common for teachers to ask children to refer to national geographic youtubes videos to understand more about wild animals and get acquainted to our nature.
Secondly, Computer can be source to childern's entertainment as well. There are computer games available which can help children to learn some life lessons like team work, make decision under pressure and hand-eye coordination. In addition, playing games is a great source of entertainment. Online quizzes, puzzles help them to boost their problem-solving abilities.
Thirdly, Children can use computer to pursue their hobbies which otherwise could be more expensive. For example- children can use online paint and brush to learn drawing. Furthermore, there are many youtube tutorials available which helps children to develop any hobby systematically which can keep them engaged in cost effective manner.
All in all, If parents, teacher or legal guardian ensures that children are spending limited time everyday on the computer and has controlled access to contents and been trained on how to use computer and internet, device can definitely strengthen overall development of our future generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to draw'.
Suggestion: to draw
...can use online paint and brush to learn drawing. Furthermore, there are many youtube tu...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he computer and has controlled access to contents and been trained on how to use ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, thirdly, well, as to, for example, in addition, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33018867925 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79859550178 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588050314465 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3053648555 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7058823529 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182363293548 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657411341269 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03946564947 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103610981629 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467121691179 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.