Actually, a lot of people around the world have a strange ability that anyone hasn't seen same as this. for instance, people have tolerant high weight or movement unnatural as if they aren't any bones.
I consider talent program has enormous opportunity for persons haven't chosen to well-known because of nowadays social media help to them and also anyone watches this shows understand yourself and if they have any ability, they will encourage to improve it.
as well as, huge of men are flowing this even on the internet or if they have spare time, they watch live. I think it's very entertaining for all and it's funny. usually, these programs have two part that held two night and the people watched live could participation to select one of the participants with sending the vote.
also, I believe that these shows have many disadvantages that I decide to mention some of them, for example, some performance is dangerous for children because they saw it and they decide to do that without any experience since they don't this matter if they want to do that, they must a lot of exercises under the supervision of the coach. another thing can be mention is the performance disgusting. I saw some play that vomiting because they ate unhealthy foods and drinks and also sometimes mixed together or share between their partner through their mouth.
In conclusion, the talent show is a perfect program for entertaining audiences and participants because the audiences enjoy their free times and participants find a new chance to improve their life or grow up their ability.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: lethianhthu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, so, well, another thing, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88764044944 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59255037643 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59925093633 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.316702837 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.5 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194283966733 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706241545577 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516777724039 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107798489606 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241371542905 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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