Write a letter to your current employer. In your letter? explain why you will not pursue a full-time job in his/her company? say why you’ve enjoyed working for him/her? tell him/her how much longer you will continue to work for him/her.
Dear Sir,
My name is samvedna Puri, currently designated as junior accountant in Accounts Department at your organisation. I am inscribing this piece of epistle to submit a 30 days prior notice of resignation. Because, as you are acquainted with the fact that i have compeleted my masters in commerce recently and now eligible to apply for the job of lecturer in a college.
Since, it has been 2 years that i am working in this institution which bestowed me life changing experiences therefore, i will invariably owe to the corporation for believing in me. Along with that endowing me part-time job opportunity on the basis of my graduation to serve. Undeniably, the ambience of this workplace and working conditions for the employees are commendable.
Even though it is going to be a hardhearted moment for me but everyone should always aspire for improvements as you say. Moreover, i am here for a month to sum up my work and accomplish the given targets.
I anticipate a positive response and warm wishes from your end.
Your faithfully,
Samvedna Puri
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...me life changing experiences therefore, i will invariably owe to the corporation ...
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...at endowing me part-time job opportunity on the basis of my graduation to serve. ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...for improvements as you say. Moreover, i am here for a month to sum up my work a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, therefore, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 179.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00558659218 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09445773513 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670391061453 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4198066945 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176104975286 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635238335677 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330204499449 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930961335507 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350736823949 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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