You are relocating to a new city. Write a letter to an agent to arrange a house for you and your family.
In your letter, you should tell:
– when you will relocate
– why you are relocating
– what kind of house you want.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Ahmed Karem, and I am one of your clients In Jeddah office. I am writing to you; I need your help to rant a new house.
I am working as a production engineer at a steel factory in Jeddah; Our Company will open a new factor in Dammam. I have been chosen to be a production manager for the new factory; Therefore, I would like to change my home and search for a new one in Dammam.
Another point I need to discuss with you is that I need a small house with two-bedroom, living room, and a kitchen. I will appreciate it if you can find this house near to the industrial area. In addition to that, I prefer it to be on the second floor.
The final thing I forget to tell you is that I am going to shift there on 15 August; if you can arrange it to be ready on 1st of August, I will find the time to arrange myself and transfer my furniture.
I look forward to hearing from you. Should you require any further information, you will contact me; here it is my number: 557766774. Thanks in advance.
Faithfully yours,
Ahmed Karem
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 260, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ome and search for a new one in Dammam. Another point I need to discuss with you...
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Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I prefer it to be on the second floor. The final thing I forget to tell you is ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
... The final thing I forget to tell you is that I am going to shift there on 15 Au...
^^
Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Thanks in advance. Faithfully yours, Ahmed Karem
^^^^^
Line 11, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e. Faithfully yours, Ahmed Karem
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, second, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 1615.20841683 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 174.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27586206897 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50917197139 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 506.74238477 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.1032346538 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347051175061 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115778637847 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866507762797 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19201612733 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706303983059 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 50.2224549098 158% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 12.4159519038 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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