You have been busy with your studies for the past month and haven't had time to visit your family.
Write a letter to your grandmother. In your letter:
• Apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner
• Explain why you have been so busy
• Arrange a time to visit
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Grandmother,
I hope you are doing well. I am really sorry to let you know that I couldn't come to see you.
My university classes has recently been started and I'm going very much busy with my studies as one of my teacher have assigned me a social project to distribute 100 blankets to poor people around the city as the weather is getting freeze. For this purpose my instructor has told me that I'll get good grades if I'll complete this before the next week. So that's why I'm occupied in this task along with my class mates.
However, the good news is that I'll be getting off from my university by next month and I've planned that this time I'd spent 1 full month in our town and I am hoping that mom and dad would surprise me on my birthday which is coming in mid of next month. I've bought a wheel chair for you since last time you told me that you want to replace you current wheel chair.
So I'm desperately waiting for the next month to come and meet with you and our whole family.
Keep in touch
Jeetender
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: couldn't
... am really sorry to let you know that I couldnt come to see you. My university cla...
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Suggestion: I'm
...y classes has recently been started and Im going very much busy with my studies as...
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Suggestion: I'll
...has told me that Ill get good grades if Ill complete this before the next week. So ...
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Suggestion: that's
... complete this before the next week. So thats why Im occupied in this task along with...
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Suggestion: I'm
...this before the next week. So thats why Im occupied in this task along with my cla...
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Suggestion:
... this task along with my class mates. However, the good news is that Ill be ge...
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Suggestion: I've
...ff from my university by next month and Ive planned that this time Id spent 1 full ...
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Suggestion: I'd
...xt month and Ive planned that this time Id spent 1 full month in our town and I am...
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Suggestion: I've
...y which is coming in mid of next month. Ive bought a wheel chair for you since last...
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Suggestion: I'm
...eplace you current wheel chair. So Im desperately waiting for the next month ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, well, as to, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 196.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30102040816 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12198287661 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627551020408 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.03913872 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213634608243 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911092811181 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449770301906 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13240170276 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308417302533 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 12.4159519038 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 78.4519038076 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.