You have read an online article about the best living arrangement for college students Four of the options are mentioned below along with some of the reader s comments Write an essay discussing the advantages and disadvantages of two the options You shoul

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You have read an online article about the best living arrangement for college students. Four of the options are mentioned below, along with some of the reader's comments. Write an essay discussing the advantages and disadvantages of two the options. You should explain which one you think is the best option. Give reasons to support your answer. You may refer to the opinions of other readers, but you should use your own words.

Submitted by Anh1405 on Sun, 01/16/2022 - 00:27

University is a quite different level of education compared to other levels such as secondary school and
high school. You may go to a university in another province, another country which is different from
your hometown, so you have to find a place to live. Living at home with your parents and living in
college dorms are two ways highly recommended. And there are pros and cons of both alternatives.

Living at home with your parents can be a great choice. First and foremost, you will get the cozy, safe
feeling of being at home. Everything is familiar to you, and you can do everything that you want without
compromising the privacy of the people you just met at university. Besides, You can learn from your
parents' experience. They've already done the things you're trying to do and they'll share their
experience with you: career advice, relationship advice, how to dress for an interview, how to cook a
fancy meal.. any help you need to take that next step. Nevertheless, it also has some disadvantages. A
potential fall-out with your folks will appear. Since there is a generational gap between you and your
parents, you can't expect them to think or behave like you. Therefore, you have to prepare for a clash of
opinions, keeping in mind that it is you who will have to compromise and let go of many things.

Living in college dorms sounds fun. It is dormitory when making more friends, boarder your horizons
about culture knowledge in over the worlds. Usually are there some are sleepless nights to talk and
listen with your roommates about their or your life and times. With youth, a dormitory might be a place
full of hustle and bustle. However, it also has some drawbacks. Because of the collective activity, noise
and confusion are unavoidable. Not everyone has the same schedule of activities, so there will be times
when you feel annoyed and want to be alone. Not to mention the time to focus, especially during exam
season.

When you go to college, you are eighteen, so being independent is something that you have to learn
and get used to. My own view is that the advantages of living in college dorms outweigh the
disadvantages. Anyway, living in a dormitory on a university campus helps students good training to
standing on their own feet in the future.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 21, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: They've
...an learn from your parents experience. Theyve already done the things youre trying to...
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Line 9, column 52, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...erience. Theyve already done the things youre trying to do and theyll share their ex...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 75, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they'll
... done the things youre trying to do and theyll share their experience with you: caree...
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 11, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... an interview, how to cook a fancy meal.. any help you need to take that next ste...
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Line 11, column 14, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Any
... interview, how to cook a fancy meal.. any help you need to take that next step. N...
^^^
Line 13, column 14, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... gap between you and your parents, you cant expect them to think or behave like you...
^^^^
Line 17, column 45, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'Usually' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: Are Usually
...t culture knowledge in over the worlds. Usually are there some are sleepless nights to talk...
^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, besides, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84634760705 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64567337119 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544080604534 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6665267757 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.96 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.88 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248576674382 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661318000478 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444164196041 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0706110979134 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048920531944 0.056905535591 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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