You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
Many countries around the world are significantly increasing their population which it can be a huge problem for the environment, economy and education. Moreover, when you have a lot of people in a region the social problems start to happens for example: assault, unemployment, discrimination and others.
The biggest thing that the government should worry is what is going happen in the future when the children grow up and start to work and do not have enough job for everyone. Starting a big crises in the country affecting the workers which needs to work to support their families. We cannot forget about the education and the environment that will be also affected once the quantities of cars and fabrics is going to increase polluting more the region and the planet.
In my opinion, the solution to overcame this situation is always the education. The reason why I have this thought is when people have education it is easier to control all the problems. They always will think in the next person helping each other trying to do the best and they are going to avoid throw rubbish inside the oceans. Saving the animals, Earth and humans. Since the human was created by God. We are not respecting the planet how we should because we do not have enough education to live in.
In conclusion, the best way to have a better life is everyone helping each other. Furthermore the government should invest more money in education encouraging their to learn good manners and how to live in a social life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 235, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'happen'.
Suggestion: happen
...n a region the social problems start to happens for example: assault, unemployment, dis...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'cris', 'crise', 'crisis'?
Suggestion: cris; crise; crisis
...enough job for everyone. Starting a big crises in the country affecting the workers wh...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'will' and 'think'.
Suggestion: will always think
...asier to control all the problems. They always will think in the next person helping each other t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 370, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
.... Saving the animals, Earth and humans. Since the human was created by God. We are no...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 83, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...er life is everyone helping each other. Furthermore the government should invest more money...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80384615385 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60895986892 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561538461538 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2266093098 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0769230769 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182748465206 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545917179438 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557031785712 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104602026719 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442292776711 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.