You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
There have been several argument between whether or not individuals cannot contribute to a better environment, and only the governments and large companies can take charge of it. Personally, I do not agree with this statement and because of two reasons.
First, the governments and large companies pay more attention to their goals other than protecting the environment. I am not say that government and companies ignore the environment, however, they certainly have many bigger concerns to consider. The government have so many responsibilities, such as caring for the nation's economy, communicating with other neighor countries, and building and equipping the country. Large company may concern how to gain stable income, and to enlarge their popularity. Therefore, improving the environment will only be a little concerns in their many tasks.
On the other hand, I believe it is the citizens who would make a difference as individuals. This is best indicated through the speech and actions of Greta Thunberg, a 16 year-old environmental activist, which had called for immediate actions to protect the environment and drew the attention of many authorities and people over the world. From then she created the 'Greta effect", where people take actions such as planting, recycling and spreading the message to improve the environment. This occurence also made the nations and mass organisations starting to take actions into improving the environment.
In short, I think it is safe to say that individuals do have a big distribution to improving the environment, more than only the government and large companies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun argument seems to be countable; consider using: 'several arguments'.
Suggestion: several arguments
There have been several argument between whether or not individuals cann...
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Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...here have been several argument between whether or not individuals cannot contribute to a bett...
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Line 3, column 316, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...esponsibilities, such as caring for the nations economy, communicating with other neigh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, i think, in short, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42519685039 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14271884733 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574803149606 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.798767999 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.833333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191804412559 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727302146161 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425482130865 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131714210584 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492882308684 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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