You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
You should write at least 254 words.
Society is a place where people from different religions reside together. Therefore, they have some rules to live peacefully without any religious or other disturbance from others. Also, it is true that with the absence of laws, it is impossible to work for any society. Although, I strongly convinced with the statement, but still some changes are necessary.
To begin with, it is common thought among human beings that if one person is indulged in bad company that one would spoil his life along with his family where society can not be stay safe in this case. To elaborate, drugs are the most common issue among youngsters as one involves other and this thing continues to destroy whole community. Here, rules play most important role that anybody outside from the colony needs to show identity at main entrance so that suspicious person can not come inside.
After discussing regular idea of affecting whole area by one, now I would shed light on other rules such as parking, night parties and many more. It is undeniable fact that everybody have right to do so whatever he or she want to do. However, to make healthy living regulations are must. For instance, a school could not function properly if it does not create rules for attendance and prohibit cellphones in class, because these laws help students to focus on study. In the same way, if there is no rule for parking in any living area it would create conflict between the members of that area.
To sum up, I share my opinion with this view as I mentioned above. However, to run smoothly change is the necessity of time. Hence, with the passage to time some rules need to be vary to meet with the era.
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| 2020-12-27 | skgurna4567@gmail.com | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
... have right to do so whatever he or she want to do. However, to make healthy living ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 595, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...flict between the members of that area. To sum up, I share my opinion with this ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, still, therefore, for instance, such as, it is true, to begin with, to sum up, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67346938776 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37519225495 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639455782313 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3353884235 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137690110916 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416462682477 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419632719701 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741897096589 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224451356395 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.