You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Should long-term job seekers in receipt of government benefits be made to do voluntary work so that they give something back to the community?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Yes, long-term job seekers should be made to do voluntary work in order to evade thinking negative thoughts and create social goods. In other words, volunteering work may give them to experience a change that they have never tried before.
While looking for a long-term job, they are receiving government benefits such as monthly paychecks and essential foodstuffs. That means they still have free food supply so the government is worrying that these seekers may form an arrogant character and dependent thought. The above things are the reasons explaining why long-term job seekers should do voluntary work so as to promptly prevent them from that consideration.
There is some voluntary work that they can take on during the waiting time until they have a relevant job with their skills. Firstly, they should take part in environmental activities such as doing garbage disposals to renew their living places. Secondly, they should try to enroll in a free course that relates to designing skills or writing skills in order to supplement their CV. This may help them make a good impression on the employers on the interview day. Furthermore, voluntary work can be a hallmark between active people and passive ones, which helps employers hire proper employees for the company's traits. Lastly, they should be a member of their favorite clubs since based on that they can be turned the passive person into active ones according to the survey about mature teenagers. Besides, joining a club may help them form a new relationship and bridge the gap between themself and society. In the modern day, having wide relationships might benefit them in privacy and as a whole.
Indeed, in the hustle and bustle of fast-paced life, if long-term job seekers do not join in voluntary work in order to create valuable good for society as well as paint more colorful colors into their life, they may not have a chance to show off their good impacts to the public.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, as to, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98165137615 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55759896381 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565749235474 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6734203082 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.357142857 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313818565238 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106047399878 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722299389384 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202396643902 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630214789431 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.