You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.
Why do you think this is happening?
What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
I think it is true that each household and family produces a large amount of rubbish every day. Governments have many solutions to reduce the amount of rubbish produced. Rubbish are producing more and more because people don’t have awareness to protect environment . We are discuss about this problem in this essay.
First of all, there are more and more rubbish because number of population are rises. People’s life is develop day by day and their demand are increase, so they are buy newest things. If something breaks, they throw it away and buy new one.
Secondly, morden women love fashions and they are willing to buy anything new of fashions. For example, woman usually buy long dress to go to the party and they only wear it one times, so they will buy different dress on next party. They throw away a lot of thing, so rubbish will be more.
The gorverment has many polocies to reduce garbage. Using carton box instead of nylon when people go to market to buy something. Throw rubbish in the trash and reuse useful materials. Collecting old paper, glass and plastic bottles. We should recycle as much as posibble.
In conclusion, the gorverment and people should be responsible for reduce rubbish. Furthermore, people should be learn how to protect environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 270, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...;t have awareness to protect environment . We are discuss about this problem in th...
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Line 1, column 280, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'discussed'.
Suggestion: discussed
...areness to protect environment . We are discuss about this problem in this essay. Firs...
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Line 2, column 108, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'developed'.
Suggestion: developed
...lation are rises. People's life is develop day by day and their demand are increas...
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Line 2, column 170, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'buy the newest'.
Suggestion: buy the newest
... their demand are increase, so they are buy newest things. If something breaks, they throw...
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Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of things'.
Suggestion: a lot of things
...nt dress on next party. They throw away a lot of thing, so rubbish will be more. The gorverme...
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Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'learned', 'learnt'?
Suggestion: learned; learnt
... rubbish. Furthermore, people should be learn how to protect environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92165898618 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56949532072 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608294930876 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7075648931 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.8235294118 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.7647058824 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220223483237 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756564657154 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717967408743 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123893385981 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108606748609 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.