You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Some people believe that nowdays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
write at least 250 word
he availability of choices is a complex issue. According to some individuals, there are infinite options to choose from whereas others believe we do not have enough variety. This essay will discuss that there are plenty of options available for everybody.
The variety of food has become the essence of life for some people. It is because society has become multi-cultural and many want to try other countries food. In addition, the corporations related to food industries are representing various cuisines as “International cuisines” which increased the curiosity of many people to taste those items. For example, Toronto, which is the financial capital of Canada, has become a hub for various ethnicities and that is why Canadians want to try out those food options. Therefore, there is no dearth of various tasty options.
Are there enough T.V channels? No one could deny the abundance of various channels because nowadays everybody wants entertainment at a low cost and this is probably their best bet. To illustrate, last week “Game of Thrones”, which is a popular T.V show, was streamed on HBO channel and my coworkers watched it instead of going out of town on the long weekend. Thus, some people enjoy watching T.V at home rather than spending their money outside.
In conclusion, this essay discussed that there are various options available in terms of food dishes and T.V channels. People want to savour a wide range of dishes and that is why variety is available. Moreover, the demand for tons of T.V channels is because it offers entertainment and low cost. In my opinion, I completely agree that there are plentiful options available in every walk of life.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-07-11 | sunnysheokand10 | 61 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
he availability of choices is a complex is...
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Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun want seems to be countable; consider using: 'many wants'.
Suggestion: many wants
...e society has become multi-cultural and many want to try other countries food. In additio...
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Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...lti-cultural and many want to try other countries food. In addition, the corporations rel...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: V
...us tasty options. Are there enough T.V channels? No one could deny the abundan...
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Suggestion: V
... of Thrones', which is a popular T.V show, was streamed on HBO channel and m...
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...end. Thus, some people enjoy watching T.V at home rather than spending their mone...
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Suggestion: V
...available in terms of food dishes and T.V channels. People want to savour a wide ...
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...ble. Moreover, the demand for tons of T.V channels is because it offers entertain...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12949640288 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9348814832 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564748201439 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5328833546 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.125 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0923026348911 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03006295778 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0248208775922 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.060041913628 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245114229816 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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