You stayed at your friend’s house when you attended a conference in Australia. Unfortunately, you left a large envelope with some important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter:
• thank your friend for the stay
• describe where you left the envelope
• ask him/her to return it to you by post
Dear Jay,
I hope that this letter finds you in the best of health and spirits. I’m writing to let you know that I’ve left some important documents in your room. I’m very thankful for the support that you provided by letting me stay at your home during the two-week conference in your city. You and your family members are so welcoming, I can’t thank enough for the love and care you gave during my stay.
What is more, I’ve left a brown envelope in the cupboard which is situated in the corner of your room. I don’t remember exactly whether it’s in the second or third drawer. As the envelope contains my educational documents, which I brought as a proof of eligibility to attend the conference, their importance can’t be denied.
I would like to suggest that please send the said envelope by the International Courier service to my home address which is mentioned on the envelope. Don’t forget to send the tracking id as it’s the only way to locate documents.
I will wait for your reply.
With best regards,
Sara Khan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, third, you know, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 184.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98913043478 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65001248347 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7951949852 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4545454545 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414782792109 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153030964582 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127869622404 0.0667982634062 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21478284037 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.17084949006 0.056905535591 300% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.