RECENT DECADES HAVE WITNESSED A LARGE NUMBER OF PEOPLE LIVING IN THE COUNTRYSIDE HAVE LEFT HOMES TO STUDY OR FOR GETTING JOB IN URBAN AREAS.THERE ARE SOME REASONS FOR THIS AND THE BENEFITS OVERWEIGH THE CONSEQUENCES AS NOW WILL BE DISCUSSED.
IN GENERAL, THE MOST SIGNIFICANT FACTOR THAT LEADS THE PEOPLE TO SHIFTING FOR METROPOLITAN CITIES IS THE LACK OF FACILITIES AVAILABLE IN RURAL AREAS SUCH AS INADEQUATE SPORT FACILITIES,UNAVAILABILITY OF UNIVERSITIES TO PROVIDE PROFESSIONAL COURSES SUCH AS MEDICINE,ENGINEERING,LAW COURSES AND INSUFFICIANT JOB OPPOURTUNITIES. PEOPLE MAY HAVE FOUND THAT BETTER EMPLOYABILITY MEANS BETTER SALARIES.THE URBAN AREAS ARE THE ONLY PLATFORM TO PROVIDE QUALITY EDUCATION AS WELL AS WIDER RANGE OF EMPLOYMENT BY ESTABLISHING SCHOOLS AND UNIVERSITIES WITH HIGH STANDARD OF EDUCATION, LEAVING THE STUDENTS TO GET PLACEMENT OVERSEAS WITH ATTRACTIVE SALARIES THUS IMPROVING THE QUALITY OF LIFE OF MANKIND .
IN ADDITION WITH THAT IT IS CONSIDERED BY MANY PEOPLE THAT LIVING IN COSMOPOLITAN CITIES IS A GREAT HONOUR FOR THEM IN TERMS OF MONEY AND VALUABLE EDUCATIONAL BACKGROUND.FOR EXAMPLE ,STUDYING IN A WELL REPUTED SCHOOL OR WORKING WITH A WELL KNOWN ORGANISATION MAKES A PERSON TO FEEL WELL SATISFIED.
ON THE OTHER HAND,LEAVING THE COUNTRY UNATTENDED WOULD RESULT IN THE DECLINE OF AGRICULTURAL PRODUCTS THUS RESULTING IN THE SHORTAGE OF FOOD WHICH EVENTUALLY LEADS TO STARVATION.MOREOVER SMALL SCALE INDUSTRIES LIKE COTTAGE INDUSTRIES WOULD ALSO SUFFER DUE TO INSUFFICIANT WORKERS.REARING DOMESTIC ANIMALS AND MAINTAINING THEM WOULD BE IMPOSSIBLE,EVENTUALLY DECRESING THE NUMBER OF SUCH CREATURES WHICH DISTURBES THE NATURAL FOOD CHAIN.
IN CONCLUSION,AS IT IS BENEFICIAL FOR YOUNGER GENERATION TO MIGRATE TO URBAN AREAS IN MANY WAYS OFFERING THEM WELL SOPHISTICATED LIFE MOVING TO CITIES WOULD BE A GREAT OPTION, BUT AT THE AME TIME REMOTE AREAS SHOULD ALSO BE DEVELOPED SIDE BY SIDE BY EXPANDING FACILITIES TO ACHIEVE A WELL BALANCED ECO SYSTEM.
- Some think that developing a successful career is more important than spending time with family and friends, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give our own opinion. 78
- You went on a trip and found that the guide was really helpful. Write a letter to the tour company manager.In your letter, you should:•describe the tour•tell what you liked about the tour guide•recommend manager ways/methods to appreciate the tour g 81
- Some people believe that children s leisure activities must be educational otherwise they are a complete waste of time Do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience 61
- Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages? 67
- Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children You should use your own 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in general, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62582781457 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.68001746059 2.80592935109 131% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582781456954 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.1294898993 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 283.166666667 106.682146367 265% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.3333333333 20.7667163134 242% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.8333333333 7.06120827912 323% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11634140786 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566938764426 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0272724363342 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0610273927377 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306895138582 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.3 13.0946893788 231% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.81 50.2224549098 8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.2 11.3001002004 223% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.26 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.13 8.58950901804 141% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.