Young people prefer listening to music rather than listening to the news on the radio . Is this positive or a negative trend. provide reasons and examples for your opinion?
Nowadays, youngsters prioritize listening to songs instead of paying attention to an announcement broadcast. In my opinion, it is a very negative development that makes the community unaware of the threats and left them with a lack of knowledge.
Firstly, devoting less turn to the latest updates about society makes society is more prone to face tough times. In other words, due to the advent of technology, these days most of the news is represented to alert ones about the incoming difficult situations so that they can prepare themselves accordingly, but spending sizeable duration on enjoyment rather than news will eventually make masses oblivious, and they may fall prey to adverse situations. In my area, for example, robberies have been taking place for the past 10 days, and the local authorities have announced in local radio stations not to follow that particular path, but still, there are some individuals who are unaware and becoming victims continuously.
Secondly, newscasts help youngsters to broaden the horizons of their knowledge. That is to say, a majority of young ones are taking competitive exams, where they should have a high journal knowledge about current affairs of their states or countries that is only possible to attain if they devote some to listen to news instead of music. A recent survey has shown in a college of my district
reveal that about 56% of students, who scored well in quiz programs based on journal knowledge, spend some turn listening to the radio.
On balance, although it has become more popular among teenagers to listen to songs, it has brought about too many problems for this to be considered a positive trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, in my opinion, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08333333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71916608709 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63768115942 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.6901101764 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.888888889 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6666666667 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.1111111111 7.06120827912 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198334433261 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676079148077 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489464754372 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104114225516 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336340461887 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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