There is no denying that, youngsters of today will be future of our country tomorrow. Whereas, they are the main pillars to build up the nations economy, tradition and modern technology. While stepping into latest world we see juveniles are not sensitive as before and our customs also are disappearing gradually as the globe is growing day by day.
I personally believe that, nowadays, adults are migrating to various of places either to their own country or to abroad for the sake of earning money for their family and for having personal luxurious life. These days, if a husband/wife is shifting to any other region of the nation so another person has to be with him/her to give them a mental, physical and emotional support in the life. Whilst, parents has to live without any support from their child.
Firstly, For example, adolescents used to get all the knowledge about our rituals performed, different kinds of culture and traditions from their grandparents as also they were living in a huge family before this modern era. Whereas, no they are diving into nuclear family so, child won't get proper education about Indian society and culture. Young people these days, are dominated with the western culture. In fact, they are adopting them too quickly. Lastly, In the western lifestyle people do not have any ancient culture like India. They are not admiring their parents too. So, if youngsters are going to keep following their trends then our Indian tradition will totally vanish off and in future no one will have humble heart for and respect for senior citizen and they might talk rubbish in front of elders.
In conclusion, we should teach our children about our precious culture and tradition and how to be dutiful to our seniors as well discourage them to get influenced by western way of living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...n and modern technology. While stepping into latest world we see juveniles are not sensitiv...
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... as the globe is growing day by day. I personally believe that, nowadays, adu...
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...ithout any support from their child. Firstly, For example, adolescents used t...
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... are not admiring their parents too. So, if youngsters are going to keep followin...
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...ir trends then our Indian tradition will totally vanish off and in future no one ...
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...o our seniors as well discourage them to get influenced by western way of living....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, so, then, well, whereas, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92207792208 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44638063449 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584415584416 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0668262532 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.285714286 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0885509220178 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033981812507 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487869365462 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0506552156178 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015265282117 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.