Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that when it comes to punishing criminals their ages should not be taken into consideration. Therefore, individuals ranging from teenager to adult must face the same consequences in case they break the law. Others argue that age plays an important role in our decision making skill and thus it must be a factor while determining a verdict. I personally agree with the second group opinion as I am going to explain my reasoning in the following.
First of all, adolescents are easily affected by their environment and are extremely emotional. Most of the decisions that a youngster makes are based on other people's beliefs and quite illogical. Hence, no matter how horrible their act might be, they should not be held solely responsible. In a way, they themselves are the victims. Statistics show that juveniles who turn to violence and criminal activities are mostly from poor families who have been neglected for all their lives. By abandoning them, society taught them to sought violence instead of compassion and made them the villain that they have become.
Secondly, biologically speaking, brain does not fully develop till a human reach adulthood. Brain is one of the most sophisticated organs in human's body where all one's reasoning and planning takes place. Having an undeveloped mind undermines all the actions that has been taken with that state of mind, which is the reason behind why teenagers do not have legal right to vote, make a deal, or decide for their health care. Based on this scientific evidence, it is not fair to expect youths to show the same level of understanding as grown-ups when they are physically unable to.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that adolescents must be treated differently from adults while being judged for their actions even if their crimes are as gruesome as murder.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 304, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...has been taken with that state of mind. which is the reason behind why teenagers do n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04901960784 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7037680003 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650326797386 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6963144809 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5625 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132103821082 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396364932922 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039564252959 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784109427781 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333252986611 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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