Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours.
In your letter
-explain the reasons for the noise
-apologise
-describe what action you will take
Dear Mr Brown,
I am extremely disappointed reading your letter on problems which you are facing due to high volume of the music played at my home. As you already know, I have two kids, who are very naughty, and they like to play Music system at a high volume. But, they are not aware that it is creating problems for neighbors. I personally believe that it should not happen, because it is not a gentleness and against the society rules and regulations.
I would like to apologize for the disturbance created by my children. I assure you that it would not happen again. If you would have informed me earlier then I could have resolved this issue on that time. Again, I am really sorry for the problems faced by you and your family.
Furthermore, I will disconnect my television connection immediately. It will resolve your problem. Also, it would help my kids to concentrate on their studies rather than wasting time on watching television. Nevertheless, I will explain them about the situation, so that they would avoid creating any kind of problematic noise.
I am looking forward to making a great relationship with you in the coming future.
Yours sincerely,
Matt Henry
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 71, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the disturbance created by my children. I assure you that it would not happen aga...
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Line 9, column 116, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ure you that it would not happen again. If you would have informed me earlier then...
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Line 9, column 123, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had informed'?
Suggestion: had informed
... that it would not happen again. If you would have informed me earlier then I could have resolved t...
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Line 9, column 154, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
.... If you would have informed me earlier then I could have resolved this issue on tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, nevertheless, really, so, then, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89705882353 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75797051907 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637254901961 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2145754842 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3571428571 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5714285714 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224480389045 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816910734374 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713948220335 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114008777797 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442510710414 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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