Zoos are inhumane and should be abolished. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Many people believe that there should be no zoos because they are cruel to animals, and I agree with this opinion. Zoos are like jails for wild animals that should live free, and at the same time they are completely unnecessary because we can see and learn about animals in their natural habitat.
Wild animals are born to live freely in the wild. Each different kind of animal is adapted to live in its specific habitat. It has the skills it needs to survive and live happily in the place where it was born. If you take a wild animal from its
natural habitat and put it in a zoo, it is like putting it in jail. Zoos try to make areas for their animals that are similar to their natural habitats, but they are only imitations. In addition, the animals are not free to move beyond the
walls of their cages. A zoo is nothing like an animal's wild home, and living in a zoo must be very depressing for the animals.
People say that zoos are important for research, but I don't believe this is true. It may be easier for researchers to observe animals when they are in a zoo. However, since a zoo is not an animal's natural home, you cannot assume
that a zoo animal's behavior is natural. The only way to see how animals really behave is to study them in the wild. Therefore, research is not a reason to have zoos.
In my opinion, all zoos should be shut down. It is cruel to keep animals locked up in cages. Zoos are also not the best places to do research on animals. I can see no good reason for the existence of zoos.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an animal' or simply 'animals'?
Suggestion: an animal; animals
...s of their cages. A zoo is nothing like an animals wild home, and living in a zoo must be ...
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Line 7, column 56, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... zoos are important for research, but I dont believe this is true. It may be easier ...
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Line 7, column 187, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an animal' or simply 'animals'?
Suggestion: an animal; animals
...e in a zoo. However, since a zoo is not an animals natural home, you cannot assume that a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, really, so, therefore, as for, in addition, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2724137931 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16569568779 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489655172414 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4080643772 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.8333333333 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1111111111 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187018406182 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690467899644 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875691142878 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103966539863 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696887505892 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 13.0946893788 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.19 12.4159519038 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.39 8.58950901804 74% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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