Since dawn of civilisation, hardworking played critical role in each society. A controversial question that recently raised about this characteristic is hardworking is more significant than the others because it encompass many other important characteristics. Some people adhere to this idea and beleive that hardworking is not enough alone to be successful. Some others take a radically different standpoint and claim that hardworking is the most important characteristic. I am with the second idea and lines below will shed on light my viewpoint.
First of all, the formemost idea is comming to my mind is that working long hours brings successful stroies. I think that hardworking is the most important character because of successfull people are always work hard. They always have a plan. By the way of example, Stevce Jobs is a successful person. I read a news about him. According to the news he is working 12 hours in a days. This demonstrates that successful people works hard.
In addition to the importance of working alot, I believe that people reach their goals because they are hardworking. In other words, if you want to reach your goals, you have to work alot. Life is a way that has numerous obstacles. To overcome these obstacle people have to works hard. To clarify, take my own example, during my university years I used to study so hard but at the end of the university. But now I work in a bank that is my dream.
Last but not least, hardworking encompass many other important features such as responsibility, trustability or the others.
Taking all aforementioned reasons into account, it would be concluded that hardworking may lead many good things and I choose hardworking is the most important thing to be succesfull.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'encompasses'?
Suggestion: encompasses
... significant than the others because it encompass many other important characteristics. ...
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Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...vce Jobs is a successful person. I read a news about him. According to the news he is ...
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Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...g to the news he is working 12 hours in a days. This demonstrates that successful peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, i think, in addition, such as, by the way, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 291.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0412371134 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07962837979 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556701030928 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4747119159 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.35 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.55 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140551497679 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416032162267 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424723428809 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721733831205 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323236337913 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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