Transportation was necessary for every human being from long time ago. different people used different method of transportation. they might walk or run or use public transportation, airplane. From my point of view if I wanted to travel 40 Miles I would consider my own car or train instead of bus and public transportation.
First of all, I have my own privacy in my car. No one can disturb this.
Secondly, I can give ride to whoever like as well, my friends, my family. If they want to come with me we will have a lot of fun during the trip.
I can control my time and speed my own car if I want to drive fast or slow I can. I can fix my time by the time I need to reach there.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Different
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...sed different method of transportation. they might walk or run or use public transpo...
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Line 4, column 75, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...er like as well, my friends, my family. If they want to come with me we will have ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 15.1003584229 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.0286738351 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 52.1666666667 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 553.0 1977.66487455 28% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 134.0 407.700716846 33% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.12686567164 4.8611393121 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 4.48103885553 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68305118186 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 212.727598566 41% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649253731343 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 172.8 618.680645161 28% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.4425792993 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.3 100.406767564 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.4 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0872972747624 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400298767917 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054764391564 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0465754269697 0.150856017488 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728735608809 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 11.7677419355 40% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 58.1214874552 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.1575268817 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.08 10.9000537634 56% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.4 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 86.8835125448 21% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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