As the time has gone by, everything is changing nobody is staying the same. I believe that the 21 century will be very different era among other times. In my opinion, this century will bring us more technology, more globalization, and more isolated relationship.
The last few decades, humankind reached almost all opportunities thanks to developing science and technology and this will not stop. Especially, the 21 century will be the peak point for all innovations. We will see that sharply increase in technological development.
Furthermore, coming with good progress, unfortunately, we will expose more global warmth thus, all world will face more catastrophic like the tornado, droughts. As we destroy nature, these plagues will not stop following. I do not want to be optimistic but this century will be full of bad news.
Last but not least, I believe that as we developed, our relationships are more isolated than previous. We are hanging out with our technological devices like smartphones or iPad instead of our family or our relatives. It is really annoying and one day will come, nobody will recognize each other. The population of the family will gradually decrease maybe one child or even none.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, really, so, thus, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 52.1666666667 27% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 1977.66487455 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 198.0 407.700716846 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99930696345 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 212.727598566 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631313131313 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 618.680645161 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7103469792 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.6923076923 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2307692308 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172906918344 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665958651126 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509903946496 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115935651927 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488332889206 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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