Even though some people do not consıder that the significance of the second language.I precisely believe that there are numerous benefits of learning one more language. Three conspicuous of my aspects as follows.
The main profit of the learning second language is that a new language is a new culture. As early writers said that one language, one person.That means language is an access to understand the other societies.To Know a foreign language provides us to live in a different culture without hesitating.
Furthermore, nowadays a foreign language is too obligatory to find a quality job .As markets globalise, companies are looking for the more adopted employers that must keep pace with the globalization world.Other skills like experiences or high degrees are no longer accepted alone .A language brings us forward from other candidates that apply job interview
Last but not least, before everything a foreign language makes us more improved and more advanced.Because of we are human, we cannot stay stable. We need to add ourselves new knowledge and new experiences and it starts with a different language .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 30.3222958057 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 1373.03311258 69% => OK
No of words: 179.0 270.72406181 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30167597765 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 4.04702891845 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03259555537 2.5805825403 118% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 145.348785872 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653631284916 0.540411800872 121% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 419.366225166 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 21.2450331126 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 153.241004811 49.2860985944 311% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.166666667 110.228320801 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8333333333 21.698381199 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06452816374 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 4.19205298013 406% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257224730339 0.272083759551 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133955528888 0.0996497079465 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126916055273 0.0662205650399 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144523530271 0.162205337803 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881543310505 0.0443174109184 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.3589403974 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 53.8541721854 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.0289183223 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.2367328918 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 63.6247240618 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.498013245 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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