Holidays generally honor people who have had significant importance in their nations or events which has been a deep sense in their history but if I would have a chance to create a new holiday, I could add a new holiday about our world. I want to adjust this day for raising awareness among the people from all over the world. This day would be known as World Day and it would have lasted at least 5 days for a year. The way of celebrating would be same as follows.
To begin with, these days would be separated from other days which has been monotonous as usual. I would have wanted people to shut down their technological devices such as smartphones, computers even including TV which means all gadgets work based on electricity or battery at least for one week. In this way, our beautiful nature will take a breath like the beginning of its existence. Whats more, people would be aware of their friends and their relatives without social media. The people will have an opportunity to spend quality time as previous time.
Furthermore, I want people to consider their future thanks to World Day. Unfortunately, our world is the brink of extinction but taken precautions are not enough to fix the damage in the world. Each day pollution levels are rising, with these holidays, we will have a break our damages originated from humans. Even if this break lasts for one week, I believe that it will affect the world as well. In addition, our descents will be informed of the importance of our world.
Last but not least, We might maintain the life of the world each year one more week as celebrating the Worl Day. If all citizen has considered our environment as I am considered that I firmly believe that we will reach success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, well, at least, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 299.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64548494983 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53706651953 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555183946488 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5744693026 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8125 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181591754428 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608183240212 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722188486324 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10983731471 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101294303099 0.0645574589148 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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