Nowadays, the world is developed, intricate and competitive; as a result, children have been confronted with new dilemmas while the past generation had not. As a result, parents' roles in guiding them are far more important than before. In this situation, parents are trustful teachers to children. There are several reasons why I feel like this, which I will explore in the following essay.
First, parents spend more time with their children, and they can survey their children's manners, detect their problems and help them find the best solutions. As a consequence, they are aware before others. My personal experience is one of the compelling examples of this. My sister had a problem with her friends at primary school, and my mother figured it out while her teacher did not comprehend it; my mother's advice solved that problem.
Secondly, parents know their children more than anyone; as a result, they can identify their children's pros and cons, and by considering different aspects, make the best decisions and teach them everything they need. For instance, my nephew has a sensitive spirit, and his parents teach him different techniques in hard situations that help him to control his aggression. While different psychoanalysts supplied different solutions, considering my nephew's different sides, his parents selected the combinations of different solutions.
Last point but not least, morality values have various definitions in different families. Therefore this is the parents' duty to teach every necessary thing that is true with patience. They consider all the merits and demerits of things and then start to teach; in other words, teachers may teach some values while the families' values differ. In these situations, the parent can have a more colorful role and teach extra skills to their children. For example, emigrated children have conspicuous differences in their beliefs, and they have conflicts with their classmates. In this state of the affair, the role of their parents is important.
In a nutshell, I do believe that parents are the first and the best instructors for their children because they spend time with their kids and can comprehend the children's traits, plus they are also more aware of family moral values. Hence they have a serious role in the upbringing of children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i feel, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1950.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24193548387 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69311373739 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537634408602 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.219349573 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.631578947 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5789473684 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47368421053 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118778285131 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436602000598 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306322203176 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773019058104 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221323923838 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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