The 21st century has begun. What changes do you think this new century will bring? Use examples and details in your answer.
When it comes to the issue that what is the best changes that you anticipate to be happened in the 21st century? It is quite normal that people have various opinions about this question. As far as I am concerned, I think that it would better that human decrease the green house gases and colonize the Mars.
First and the most important change that human should do is to decrease the amounts of green house gases such as carbon dioxide and methane. After the industrial revolution, our world has inundated with factories and machines, which makes life comfortable. However, increasing human activities has increased the amount of carbon dioxide into atmosphere. The carbon dioxide traps the sun light and makes the earth warmer, which is called global warming. Although some may believe that the earth’s temperature will be increased some degrees, they ignore this little change can melts ice caps, elevates sea level, changes climate, and brings long droughts. In this way, it is a vital to diminish the amounts of green house gases by any way like imposing stick rules of innovation clear fuels.
Another change that it is necessarily is to colonize the mars. As we all know, increasing the population leads human to overuse of nature resources like forest, mines, or water. In addition, we are facing great predicaments like ozone depletion, water pollution, and soil erosion, that they can put human survival at the line. So it is quite normal that we will need new place for living, which is must more similar wit the Earth. The Mars, which is the fourth planet on the solar system, can be a good selection for this aim. The Mars now has not enough oxygen, water, and proper temperature, because of extreme temperature change of day and night. American space scientists believe that we can stable the mars temperature by produce green house gases, make water by chemical materials on this plant, and produce oxygen wit the assistance of plants. So, I hope that human can be able to continue their survival on this planet.
Also, I wish that scientist can gain a great achievement in curing cancers. In today’s contamination-rich environment, people are more at the risk of variety of cancers like brain cancers, lunge cancers, or mouths cancers. Scientists do not have find an effective treatment for this illness, so many people die because of concerns every year. Hence, finding a treatment for various cancers can be a great innovation in 21st century.
All above evidence supports this undeniable that human should ameliorate the environmental issue like global warming, try to find another plant for living, and cure cancers. Last but not least, I hope that next generation become more social responsible for safeguarding of nature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 581, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'melt'
Suggestion: melt
...ees, they ignore this little change can melts ice caps, elevates sea level, changes c...
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Line 7, column 252, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'found'.
Suggestion: found
... mouths cancers. Scientists do not have find an effective treatment for this illness...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'i think', 'in addition', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.268571428571 0.229887763892 117% => OK
Verbs: 0.144761904762 0.158761421928 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.104761904762 0.0866891130778 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0304761904762 0.046263068375 66% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0380952380952 0.0685040099705 56% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121904761905 0.118717715034 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0247619047619 0.0351676179071 70% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64243299693 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0152380952381 0.0309702414327 49% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0914285714286 0.0887237588012 103% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0266666666667 0.0209618222197 127% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0114285714286 0.0139019557991 82% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2763.0 2387.08602151 116% => OK
No of words: 459.0 408.028673835 112% => OK
Chars per words: 6.01960784314 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.350762527233 0.338922669872 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.252723311547 0.251872472559 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.18082788671 0.174417080927 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.108932461874 0.112833075102 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64243299693 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544662309368 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 64.842980736 59.2087087015 110% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.9565217391 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.009680438 48.84282405 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.130434783 120.699889404 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9565217391 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.478260869565 0.644075263715 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 45.2288528938 45.7405998639 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.94642857143 1.45489161554 134% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209532644943 0.300154397459 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.109350759621 0.103427244359 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0759640407028 0.0752933317313 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.496667488813 0.497263757937 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.112738922247 0.151897553556 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716517078373 0.114077575197 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467143274399 0.0781384742642 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.296043500145 0.336927656856 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.124065161251 0.067059652881 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125319629612 0.210909579961 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504817152311 0.0618886996521 82% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8870967742 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.