Making a decision can be really important and decisive sometimes. Some people think that making decisions has to be done with someone. Others believe that making decisions has to be done alone.
After stating that everyone's opinion can be different about this, for me, a
decision that affects you directly or that could have an influence, that is
important, and affects a serious topic has to be made with the help of someone.
First of all, I would say that sitting and thinking alone could be, in certain cases, a good idea. But, the fact is that you don't always think of all the other possibilities that present themselves and you may rush into a conclusion that is maybe wrong or that isn't the best.
Second, I think that talking to someone about it could help you better understand the problem that is occuring: You would have to talk about the situation, explain it with your own words, and some questions that you maybe didn't think of might be asked, or even solved, by the person you are talking with.
Third, talking about your problems and decisions you have to make with someone, may lead to a better relation between you and the person. Because, by talking to someone about a decision could be considered as confidential, you would by this way create trust bonds, and therefore, consolidating your relationship.
To conclude, I would say that making a decision is well made with the help of someone.
- A student
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, really, second, so, therefore, third, well, as to, even so, i think, talking about, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1977.66487455 61% => OK
No of words: 249.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84337349398 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52408874646 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 212.727598566 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510040160643 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 618.680645161 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.1749127784 48.9658058833 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.6 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 5.45110844103 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205206741706 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967351007614 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606820382971 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994481930702 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638350959644 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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