Computers are the type of technology that made our life easier and comfortable. However, It has some harmful consequences. In my opinion, I strongly believe that computers made our lives complicated and stressed. Therefore, I am going to explore two reasons to support my answer in the following essay.
First, Computers have a negative impact on a person’s eyes and brain. The lights reflected by the computer’s screen affect negatively our eyes. The person who uses the computer regularly have to go through some complications, their eye-sight weakens and they have to wear power glasses and contact lenses in order to see clearly. Moreover, the rays coming from the computer’s display affects our brain. As a result, we may go through insomnia and headaches. I would like to give a compelling example of myself. 5 years earlier, I used to play games on the computer. After some time, I experienced headaches and I was unable to see properly. I went to the hospital and the doctor found out that I have a problem and I will have to wear glass with prescribed power.
Second, the wide use of computer system has shortened the actual communication between people. Individuals these days spend most of the time online on their computer talking to their virtual friend and maintaining their virtual and almost fake life. They spend very little time with their family and relatives. The actual communication is necessary between two family members and friends because after some time the person starts to believe everything he sees online and it affects him. For instance, I had a friend whose parents gifted him the computer on his birthday. He used to spend most of his time on social media and other stuff and lesser time with his parents and siblings. After some time, he made a new friend. That friend was totally stranger to him. He developed some feelings for her. Eventually, we found out that she was not a real person and she deceived him. He was very affected by this incident that he took so much time to recover from that. If he talked to his parents nothing would have happened because they have much more experience of life and people than him. so, they would have known and warned him about her.
In conclusion, I would like to say that the computer has hundreds of benefits but it also has thousands of demerits and consequences. So, the person who uses this technology should use it with precautions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...online and it affects him. For instance, I had a friend whose parents gifted him ...
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Suggestion: So
...experience of life and people than him. so, they would have known and warned him a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2023.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85131894484 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71900148547 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510791366906 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1112196179 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.25 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8928571429 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.67857142857 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248197508075 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619954229335 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561738561763 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152708697648 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462605393042 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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