Adults today are more independent and can make decisions without their parents' support? agree or disagree
Since the beginning of the current century, adults have become more independent. Some people believe that young people need their parents' support and advice to make decisions; however, there is a substantial body of evidence that casts doubt on these beliefs. From a personal perspective, Adults nowadays could make decisions without help, given that they are more educated, responsible, and experienced.
The first and foremost point, the education system has become more productive, given that they use effective design in the learning process, such as using the internet. A vivid example can be given to shed light on what was elaborated is, schools in Canada stared to learn students by ideas and concept instead of learning facts, which improves students' brain function. Likewise, this sort of learning system can enhance students' imagination and creativity, which maximizes the potential learning outcomes. Consequently, more educated adults can be more independent.
Next, couple with proper education, responsibility is another reason why young people could make decisions. For example, in industrial countries such as the United States of America and Canada, students take loans to admit to colleges. Moreover, they start to work part-time jobs to earn money to pay their tuition fees and other college-related costs. Provided that young people involved in practical life early, that enhances their abilities to make decisions. Not only because they can manage their budget, but also they can be financially independent. Therefore, taking responsibility helps adults to make decisions.
Although the previous reasons are the first ones which cross the mind at a glance, they are not the only available points. There is another subtle point that must be born in mind. The technological invention nowadays opens the door to a wealth of information. A survey conducted by the University of Toronto found that teenagers who want to admit to universities use searching websites such as Google, or YouTube to analysis the strength and the weakness of these colleges. Moreover, Adult can know the way of admission and the availability; so they can do everything by themselves without their parents' help. As a result, young people today can make their own decisions.
Taking everything into consideration; without a doubt, adults nowadays are independent. It is suggested that schools design learning activities that could improve students' abilities to make decisions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, therefore, for example, sort of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2094.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48167539267 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88739064773 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560209424084 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4635446486 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7142857143 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1904761905 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.80952380952 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26790779575 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815197461109 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774690269219 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153022527948 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616946552787 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 10.9000537634 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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