Technology made our life easy and comfortable. Nowadays the advance transportation system not only helped us to communicate with each corner of the world, but also provided a way to step on the moon. So, Technologies like computer, internet, motors and other modern innovation helped us in different ways. I think the most important technological innovation of tweenty-first century is internet for several reasons.
First of all, internet made our life easy and modern. Nowadays we do not have to thavel a lot to see friends and family who lives abroads. Previously, It was quite impossible to treval abroad because it genarally took too much time and money. But, now we have mobile phone, setelite phone. Nowadays, it is possible to communicate with other through internet via phones or different messenger application. Besides, it helped to learn different things such as different culture, fashion, news and so on. We can now get whatever information we want. For instance, there are many website on internet in where there are many e-books in various topics.
Secondly, Previously we had to send written documents through post office and it took a lot of time to deliver a mail. But, Internet made it easy, providing email. Now we can send various documents or other personal think like pictures, vedio, ets through email. Internet helped a lot to be connected vertually.There are several vertual social media such as Facebook, Whatsapp, Viber, Emo, and so on which of all are based on internet helps us to connent with each other globally. By this ways, a global society or culture are building through worldwide.
Finally, We can buy and sell our products through internet. Alll that customer have to do is to order and goods will be send in their home. So, it really helped a lot to expand global business. Most of the companies sells their profuct worldwidely. This way, a person living in Asia can buy a product from North America. It also helped to education as we can sit for examination online through internet.
In conclusion, itternet helping us to build a global society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 576, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'websites'?
Suggestion: websites
...n we want. For instance, there are many website on internet in where there are many e-b...
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Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
... helped a lot to be connected vertually.There are several vertual social media such a...
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Line 3, column 485, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...to connent with each other globally. By this ways, a global society or culture are b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97714285714 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78427655206 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568571428571 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0850212855 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5833333333 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5833333333 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150953903683 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424520368155 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045343665271 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922835255482 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071931871728 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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