the advertising is the most important factor of the unhealthy habits??agree or disagree??
Advertsments has been taking a great deal of space in our lives affecting us in different ways. Thus, I agree that the most significant element of unhealth habits is advertising for the following reasons.
First and foremost, advertisments became more accessble than before, which means all companies could take advantage of this feature regardless their kind of products. Due to the development of technology, advertisments could be seen in everywhere at anytime. For example, you may wach adds in television, newspaper, maggazines, and even your cell phone.
Second, technology has also enhanced the quality of these adds making it more attractive. There are lots of programs and applications designers are using to design very convencing adds that seem to be appelaing for people. For instance, Mackdonald advertisments emphisize the quality of their food by using photoshop to shed the light on the smoke that indicate howtheir foods are freash ,tastey, and warm.
Third, advertising use many stratigies to convience people with their products. As people became more aware of marketing tricks, advertising developed new techniques to attract their possible customers. Some adds used a marketing propoganda, which represent a public firuar as an icon for certain product. For example, shakera show uo in a Pespsi Coala advertisment to encourage fans of shakera to buy Pepsi.
In short, the negative effects of advertisments including motivating peopel for unhealthy habbits should be considered by people to find other healthy replacements for their choices of products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, so, third, thus, for example, for instance, in short, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 243.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49382716049 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02280672508 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674897119342 0.524837075471 129% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4631612751 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.692307692 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6923076923 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137789008667 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503519664075 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07027402392 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816227568796 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524694838912 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 10.9000537634 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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