agree or disagree about using computers in these days
Before tendering my opinion I guess it crucial to take quick glance on this argument on both sides. Many people agree that life become much easier than many years ago because of using computer. But, others believed that life being more complicated due to computers. In my point of view, I concur with the first group of people who believe that computer influences our lives. Because of many reasons i will discuss them cogent in the next paragraphs.
First reason come to my mind is technology in this era impacts people life in good way. Nowadays computer considered one of the most essential devices nationwide. Using computer allow people to raise their fundamental knowledge, critical thinking. Surveys claim that by one finger press people can increase their intelligent level.
Second reason I need to give it some attention is computer assists people by getting careers. As well as increasing their skills, talents, and experience. So, employees could work harder with efficient ways if they will use computers to do their duties. Also, people can work abroad while using computer for better communication.
Additionally, life is changing every day. We agree that computer is easier and convenient way to increase liability to done more work. We can buy some products on-line while using computer to save our time, and money. Moreover, we can get many instead of wasting our time by going to shop from Wal-Mart or any other stores.
To put it in a brief, I agree that computer impacts people life to make it easier and better. No one can imagine this world without computers. It consider one of the best innovation in these few centuries. Without computers, life will be so difficult especially reaching family or friend overseas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eve that computer influences our lives. Because of many reasons i will discuss them cog...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nces our lives. Because of many reasons i will discuss them cogent in the next pa...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is easier and convenient way to increase liability to done more work. We can buy ...
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Line 9, column 147, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'considers'?
Suggestion: considers
...magine this world without computers. It consider one of the best innovation in these few...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, well, while, i guess, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 290.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03448275862 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58235114874 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.404094183 48.9658058833 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.5238095238 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8095238095 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61904761905 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200633383925 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586223983047 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552712755259 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110998469109 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308138093301 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.