It goes without argument that a person always acts upon their self interest. People always do what they desire and need. It isn't a bad thing becouse if you don't care for yourself nobody will. However it isn't always that one act on his self interest .sometimes we also consider our families and society. In my opinion ,peole doesn't always act on their self interest most of the time we also think about others.
Firstly, it is normal to look for your self interst. In today's world we need to be strong and powerfull to go through life. We need to find our passion and self interest to reach the goals we have. Also one needs to look for their benefit and interest becouse very less people will care for our likings and benefit, so it is better we look for our own selves. For example, Bill gate is one of the richest peole in the world. He worked on what interested him alot and that was computer. He spend weeks and months on his room to built Microsoft. Who do you think would have worked on his interest if he hadn't done it himself? The answer is no one. From this example we can get that every body should act on their interest.
Secondly, we work hard hours for our families.we struggle through lot's of problems so they can have good lives. Also we care for our country and people. From childhood our dreams are to make our family and country proud.we study hard so we can reach our dream.for eample, APJ Abdul Kalam the man behind India's nucleur weponisation, he worked exhausting hours and months in his laboratory and bedroom with only one goal in mind to make his country strong.
To sum it up, not always one can think of themselves but they also value their families and countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45192307692 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18067228338 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.9410710922 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1052631579 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4210526316 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22960560371 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829456491321 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966996006678 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148744692119 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129673854448 0.0645574589148 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 58.1214874552 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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