Agree or disagree ? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students' sport activities as they give to their university libraries.
Universities are the most important and decisive organizations which have the responsibility to train and educate noble and creative people. The universities spend their budgets in severeal categories such as laboratories, classes, libraries, sport activities and so on. In my view, universities should spend more money on their libraries than on students' sport activities for one major reason.
The library is one main cores of a university. In order to do a thorough and comprehensive research, students need to refer to a vast variety of references, including books, magazines, articles, thesises and papers. Since the first and foremost responsibility and duty of a student is studying and researching, the university must provide all the required facilities for students so that there is no obstacle in pursuing their academic goals and also, they have no further excuse. With that being said, universities should spend more money on developing and extending their libraries in terms of scientefic references, both printed and digital. For example, when I was working on my master of science thesis in the Ferdowsi University of Mashhad, I needed to read several articles related to my thesis subject, in order to perform a comprehensive literature survey. When I went to our central library to request those articles, I found out that I canot access to them since they were not free and the university couldn't provide them for me neither, because the lack of funding resources regarding library expanses. As a result, I went through a lot of difficulties and hardships to finally get an access to those articles and therefore I lost some precious time because of that. From this personal experience, I firmly believe that expending more money on libraries must be one of top prorities of every university.
On the other hand, if the university spend more money on sport activities rather than libraries, although there may can be some achievements in sport tournaments, but the overall outcome would be harmful for the university's reputation. In fact, if the university does not provide the necessary scientific resources for the students by means of expanding the libraries, the students of that university will have to refer to other libraries outside the university. As a result, that university will be stigmatized as a university which cannot even provide the mere basics for its students researches and academic works. Consequently, this university will gradually lose its students through time.
In sum, I strongly believe that the university budgets must be assigned based on priorities, and the library is one of the main, if not the most important one. Hence, I suggest that the universities do not spend same amount of money on students' sport activities, and instead, develop and improve their library resources and facilities to further provide a desired academic atmosphere for their students.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1201, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
...fficulties and hardships to finally get an access to those articles and therefore I lost ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'finally', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'in fact', 'such as', 'as a result', 'in my view', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.258003766478 0.229887763892 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.124293785311 0.158761421928 78% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0828625235405 0.0866891130778 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0338983050847 0.046263068375 73% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0508474576271 0.0685040099705 74% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129943502825 0.118717715034 109% => OK
Participles: 0.030131826742 0.0351676179071 86% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.11962259988 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0282485875706 0.0309702414327 91% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0979284369115 0.0887237588012 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0225988700565 0.0209618222197 108% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0075329566855 0.0139019557991 54% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2944.0 2387.08602151 123% => OK
No of words: 466.0 408.028673835 114% => OK
Chars per words: 6.31759656652 5.86048508987 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.381974248927 0.338922669872 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.347639484979 0.251872472559 138% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.244635193133 0.174417080927 140% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.171673819742 0.112833075102 152% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11962259988 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480686695279 0.524397521467 92% => OK
Word variations: 54.5488733983 59.2087087015 92% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 27.4117647059 20.5533526081 133% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9674596967 48.84282405 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 173.176470588 120.699889404 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4117647059 20.5533526081 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.644075263715 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 62.1757132037 45.7405998639 136% => OK
Elegance: 2.0 1.45489161554 137% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368559716515 0.300154397459 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.146328104573 0.103427244359 141% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0898928583369 0.0752933317313 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.552192042135 0.497263757937 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141424947995 0.151897553556 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155992047352 0.114077575197 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599777623245 0.0781384742642 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.402582462125 0.336927656856 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0480782204086 0.067059652881 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273104454077 0.210909579961 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00817456693974 0.0618886996521 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
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Suggestions:
Don't always use 'you, I, they' as the subject of a sentence.
Rates: 77.0 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 23 Out of 30