Agree or disagree?
Freindship is waste of time and we have to spend our time on sth valuable.
Friendship is a word but nobody can describe it. From the date of birth until the date of death we need friends and friendships. Why is it so important? Why cannot we survive without friends? Maybe because that we need to trust somebody and confide with him/her. Human needs to get along with people who are similar to him and can understand him. The crucial question is that which friend is better? Old one or new one? In my view, we have to keep our old friends and after sometimes gradually increase the circle of our friendships.
First of all, one of the reasons we are seeking friends is confidence. All of us confront difficult situations and may have some secrets that do not want share with anybody except trustworthy people. For example, at school when we got bad scores, we were ashamed and could not talk with our parents or all of our classmates. So we talked with our close friends to feel better and they tried to calm us down. Without real friendships, we could not tolerate hardships and we could be depressed.
Moreover, we can hang out with our close friends due to similar interests and favorites which has positive effects on mental health. For instance, a recent study at Harvard University shows that sociable people are at lower risk of suffering from depression and anxiety compared to dissociable people. Scientists explain that in speaking process we reduce our stress which is very useful for our heart. Therefore, talkative women show lower rate of heart diseases than silent men. This study confirms that a good friendship can help you feel healthy.
Furthermore, some assert that friendship is not something more than wasting time. Human should spend their time on valuable works and hobbies like reading some books or going to the gym. I believe that a good friend would motivate you to participate in sport activities and both of you can join to your neighborhood library. Although there are some bad friends, reliable friends can push you to improve your abilities and strengthen your strong points of personality.
To wrap up, friendship is more important than everything in the world and in my opinion it is very venerable. We should be surrounded with worthy friends and keep this relationship pure.
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
This is not so related to the topic:
In my view, we have to keep our old friends and after sometimes gradually increase the circle of our friendships.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 24 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 384 350
No. of Characters: 1813 1500
No. of Different Words: 222 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.427 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.721 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.509 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 123 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 95 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 58 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 40 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.36 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.966 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.48 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.275 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.472 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.194 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'for example', 'for instance', 'first of all', 'in my opinion', 'in my view']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.216666666667 0.229887763892 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.159523809524 0.158761421928 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0857142857143 0.0866891130778 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0357142857143 0.046263068375 77% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0952380952381 0.0685040099705 139% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12619047619 0.118717715034 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0214285714286 0.0351676179071 61% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59843730323 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0309523809524 0.0309702414327 100% => OK
Particles: 0.00714285714286 0.00188951952338 378% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.05 0.0887237588012 56% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0333333333333 0.0209618222197 159% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0190476190476 0.0139019557991 137% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2242.0 2387.08602151 94% => OK
No of words: 383.0 408.028673835 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85378590078 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.32637075718 0.338922669872 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.263707571802 0.251872472559 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.167101827676 0.174417080927 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.109660574413 0.112833075102 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59843730323 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579634464752 0.524397521467 111% => OK
Word variations: 67.8037905365 59.2087087015 115% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.32 20.5533526081 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7858668513 48.84282405 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.68 120.699889404 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.32 20.5533526081 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.56 0.644075263715 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 41.6907571802 45.7405998639 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.25409836066 1.45489161554 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339909446922 0.300154397459 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0790147092396 0.103427244359 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0733317752528 0.0752933317313 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.421616637114 0.497263757937 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.134158778593 0.151897553556 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990511675778 0.114077575197 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056442683056 0.0781384742642 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.262970367469 0.336927656856 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0754926057889 0.067059652881 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197659336012 0.210909579961 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485481155535 0.0618886996521 78% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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