There is heated controversy among the people whether, nowadays, life is easier and more comfortable than past or not. Some people believe that in our modernized life, with its galloping progress, people enjoy welfare, well-being and so forth. Nonetheless, other believe otherwise. They argue that new generation suffer from the hectic lifestyle. I, for one, subscribe to the former group on account of some conspicuous reasons. Technology development, Industrilazation and improvement in society are three of a which with greater importance.
Without any shadow of a doubt technology plays a vital role as far as welfare and comfort of societies concerns. In our modern life, especially in the last decade, technology has been improved significantly in miscellaneous fields such as invention of state-of-the art computers, factory machines and medical apparatus, to name but a few. It is crystal clear that, this improvement has enhanced the level of various social strata's life. To illustrate this point, Take for instance computers, which has revolutionized world. In past people had to send a letter with hardship to communicate with their relatives, colleagues and so on. However, contemporary people can send hundreds of email via computer and internet.
It is incontrovertibly axiomatic that, without a proper occupation, no one cannot reach to a welfare and comfort. In past, people suffered from the lack of the decent job. Most of the people were unemployed and rest of them had to work in though jobs such as coal mines. Majority of people, due to the low income, were not able to afford to buy merchandise such as ingredient for food, clothes, decent house to name but a few. Therefore it is optimism to consider that, their life was easier. Industrialization, has brought a significant change to nations. Many factories established and huge number of citizen found job. This changes, in turn lead to the happiness and joyfulness of people.
Last but not least, Nowadays we witness a crucial improvement in our societies culture. Most of the government are democratic and people's right is respected by them. The relationship between individuals are established on friendship and respect. In contrast, in past, capitalist overrule other strata of society and human's right was trampled by authorities. Slavery was the salient example of those days tyranny. This reformation, definitely enhance our life and people which is resulted in our better life.
In a nutshell, grounded on the above statement, I do believe that people, today, have a better life than their ancestor due to the mentioned reasons.
- Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking website. 76
- Because the world is changing so quickly people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past 92
- Workers would be more satisfied if they have various kinds of work to do during workday instead of doing the same job all day long. 37
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.Use specific reasons and examples to 73
- Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do?•Interrupt and correct the mistake right away.•Wait until the class or meeting 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, for instance, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2205.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28776978417 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06955935248 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585131894484 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 688.5 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7458834137 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6666666667 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4444444444 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18518518519 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145801588733 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344090750992 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545317941927 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838322380063 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02489601937 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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