Without any hesitation, the world is changing incredibly fast and this rapid changes includes all part the human's life. The mentioned alteration may improve some aspects of our life positively, reduction in death rate, high level of welfare, enhancement in economic wellbeing are to name but few. On the other hand, some people believe that these changes lead to less happiness of people in comparison with one who were living in past. I, for one, subscribe to the former idea that the world changes bring a significant advantages for people and help them to be happy more. I hold this idea on account of three conspicuous reasons which stated hereunder.
It is crystal clear that the technologies plays a significant rule in world's quick alteration. No one can deny the fact that the improvement and changes of the technologies seek welfare and wellbeing of human race. Take for instance, The Internet which has revolutionized our life style. In past, people used to send letter to communicate with each other, nowadays they can Skype, text or send emails in less than second. Online shopping is another benefit of technology which help us to save a large amount of time which can be used in recreational activity, do sightseeing and so forth. By considering the changes endowed with technology, people are happier than they used to be.
It is incontrovertibly axiomatic that money plays a main rule as far as people happiness and welfare concerns. By rapid changes of the world, more job vacancies are become available for jobseeker. Many occupation are needed in world in various field such as technology. This galloping demand for workforce help many propel to find appropriate job which in turn leads to satisfaction about life.
Last but not least, the world rapid changes provide high level of hygine for human. Number of death resulted by miscellaneous disease are declined significantly. In past, many young people and infants were dying by diseases which is almost rare nowadays. This improvement, definitely boosts the happiness feeling among people.
To sum up, by considering the point stated above, I think, the rapid changes of the world may culminate in plentiful source of happiness and wellbeing for human being, although many individual may regard this topic from different view and oppose this belief.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...his rapid changes includes all part the humans life. The mentioned alteration may impr...
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Line 1, column 428, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
... in comparison with one who were living in past. I, for one, subscribe to the former id...
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Line 1, column 521, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'advantage'?
Suggestion: advantage
...t the world changes bring a significant advantages for people and help them to be happy mo...
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Line 2, column 288, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the past'?
Suggestion: In the past
...hich has revolutionized our life style. In past, people used to send letter to communic...
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Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun occupation seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many occupations'.
Suggestion: Many occupations
...ies are become available for jobseeker. Many occupation are needed in world in various field su...
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Line 4, column 162, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the past'?
Suggestion: In the past
...ous disease are declined significantly. In past, many young people and infants were dyi...
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Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much individual may', 'a good deal of individual may'.
Suggestion: much individual may; a good deal of individual may
...and wellbeing for human being, although many individual may regard this topic from different view a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, so, well, for instance, i think, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1946.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0942408377 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78187399947 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573298429319 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7055924913 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286593837259 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829838090802 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972252551398 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150458150333 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07399473698 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.