Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking website.

Submitted by nima_323 on Wed, 10/25/2017 - 12:56

Without any shadow of doubt, Education plays a significant rule as far as development of society concerns. Different aspects of children's life such as job opportunity, economic wellbeing and social statues, to name but a few are directly influenced by their study. Some people believe, educating children is a hard task today in comparison with past, because children nowadays spend most of their time on cell phone, internet and so on. On the other hand, some people believe otherwise. I, for one, subscribe to the latter idea and believe the educating the children is more easier than before. I take this view for some conspicuous reasons which elaborate hereunder.
It is crystal clear that, in our modern life, parent as the main guardians of children, become more aware about the importance of education. Nowadays by development of societies, parent have more free time to devote to their children study. Parents by knowing their rule and also, for providing better future life for their dear children, spend more time on children education. One aspect of their rules relates to the control of children cell phone and their activities on social, to name but few. Parent also lead the children to use these technologies in right way in which help them with their education.
Without any hesitation, by developing technology, take for instance the internet, children have many facilities which can help them in their education. We have many applications on cell phone which can help the children to enhance their knowledge and also there are many social medias like LinkedIn which are established in order to improve the students and children studies and endows them with state of the art methods to improve their education. So, the cell phones, social medias are not necessarily as a barrier in educating children, they are useful if we know how to use them.
Last but not least, In our developed world, children are more cognizant of the fact that education is the cornerstone of their future life and without proper education they deprive themselves from welfare and well being in future. With this in mind, they can organize their life in a way that, playing game does not harm their education. The number of articles, invention and so forth and comparing this statistics with past, reveal the the fact that children education has been improved considerably.
In a nutshell, by improving the parents knowledge about their rule in children education, development of technology, especially in edutainment app, and also children awareness about the importance of education. I believe, the educating of children is easier than past.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 571, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...d believe the educating the children is more easier than before. I take this view for some ...
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Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: STATE_OF_THE_ART[1]
Message: Did you mean 'state-of-the-art'?
Suggestion: state-of-the-art
...d children studies and endows them with state of the art methods to improve their education. So,...
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Line 4, column 221, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... themselves from welfare and well being in future. With this in mind, they can organize t...
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Line 4, column 399, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...s, invention and so forth and comparing this statistics with past, reveal the the fa...
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Line 4, column 433, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...aring this statistics with past, reveal the the fact that children education has been i...
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Line 4, column 433, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...aring this statistics with past, reveal the the fact that children education has been i...
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Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
...rably. In a nutshell, by improving the parents knowledge about their rule in children ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for instance, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2210.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 432.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11574074074 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69786279281 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479166666667 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 702.0 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6733763896 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.315789474 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7368421053 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42105263158 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252314919715 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965855862095 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845885054182 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159280909789 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488190658864 0.0645574589148 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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