agree or disagrre.
Leadership comes naturally.
Leadership is an important part of the society in all areas such as an education system, politics, and religion. Without the leader it is hard to progress in right direction. Some people believe that leadership comes from naturally while others disagree. In my view, leaderships does not come naturally because two important reasons.
First, leadership is the learning process and each learning process takes time. If you want to be a leader, you have to learn and put hard efforts. For example, I read one topic in my sociology class. It was about Sardar Patel. How he became the first leader of Congress party in India in 1945. He was only twenty four years old when he started to work for Stayagrah experiment. It was very hard for him to put hard efforts against curruption, still he forced and stuck with the printiples of honesty and truth. In 1980, he won two thousands public votes in first election in Gujarat. He bacame the first leader after fifty years with his hard work. As you can see, the leadership does not comes naturally, it take some time and hard efforts to learn to be a leader.
Furthermore, learning leadership is depend on situation and variable factors. When you are in very difficult situations, you have to face them without escaping from those conditions. Those kind of situations learn you how to be strong leader. For instance, when I was in high school, we had to make a project on any famous leader and how they became leader. I made presentation on Mother Teresa. I searched some online sources and presented in class about Mother Teresa. She born in very poor family. Nobody was leader in her family. When she was eight years old, her parents died in earthquake in 1920 in Channai. Her parents passed away leaving her and other five siblings. Mother Teresa was oldest in all siblings. She had to face that hard situation. It made very strong person. As a rsult, she had all positive prospect of a great leader such as honesty, moral, kind, truth and loving. In 1948, she became the Mother of Church in Banglore. This example illustrate how person can learn to be leader when they have to pass from certain situations in their lives.
To sum up, leadership does not come naturally. It take time and hard efforts to be a leader. When person pass certain hard situations in their life, they learn some experiences that make them a great leader.
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- tpo integrated writing 27 90
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-four
...ess party in India in 1945. He was only twenty four years old when he started to work for S...
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Message: Did you mean 'come'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: come
...As you can see, the leadership does not comes naturally, it take some time and hard e...
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Line 3, column 691, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'come'
Suggestion: come
...As you can see, the leadership does not comes naturally, it take some time and hard e...
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Message: Did you mean 'takes'?
Suggestion: takes
...leadership does not comes naturally, it take some time and hard efforts to learn to ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
... Furthermore, learning leadership is depend on situation and variable factors. When...
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Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'Those kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; Those kinds
...without escaping from those conditions. Those kind of situations learn you how to be stron...
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Line 5, column 476, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'bore'?
Suggestion: bore
...ented in class about Mother Teresa. She born in very poor family. Nobody was leader ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er parents died in earthquake in 1920 in Channai. Her parents passed away leaving...
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Message: Did you mean 'takes'?
Suggestion: takes
... leadership does not come naturally. It take time and hard efforts to be a leader. W...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, still, while, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71531100478 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4663679484 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49043062201 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.9 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 23.0 9.59856630824 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6003584229 160% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8206761706 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.7272727273 100.406767564 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.6666666667 20.6045352989 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 5.45110844103 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108847086307 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351925970997 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082862926146 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104104447463 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664728218291 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 11.7677419355 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 58.1214874552 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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