AGREE OR DISSAGREE?
CHILDREN SHOULD NOT HAVE TO WORK OR HELP WITH HOUSEHOLD TASKS; THEIR ONLY RESPONSIBILITY SHOULD BE TO STUDY.
Well this has been a very controversial question over the last century and has faced many challenges. At the beginning of the last century it was believed that schooling was a job and students only needed to study. For this reason, boarding schools were very common, but now this is completely different, and students are learning life skills in addition to studying in the same schools and entering life as a full human being.
I also agree that students will learn all life skills. Students should also help with homework to be better prepared for future life and to help the family. For example, male students in my country have skills such as trimming lawns, building repairs, and helping the father out on the farm, and female students assist their mothers in cooking and housework.
In general, I think that education starts in school and is completed at home, and that helps students grow into adulthood. It also makes them feel more responsible in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... entering life as a full human being. I also agree that students will learn al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for example, i think, in addition, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 52.1666666667 35% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 1977.66487455 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 166.0 407.700716846 41% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85542168675 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 4.48103885553 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45265815138 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 212.727598566 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650602409639 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 618.680645161 39% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2217122154 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.75 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 5.45110844103 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141817811027 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614671493453 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668148177556 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873566100823 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064409919708 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 86.8835125448 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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