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Some people may hold the opinion that celebration and joyoce time is independent of the humans old and everyone could participate and experience equal happiness. Others, on the other hand, have negative attitude toward it. do you agree with which one ?
It is irrefutable that we live in a world which pastime and recreation, play an increasingly pivotal role in decreading the torpor and lethargy of the humans in any society.
the issue of celebration for different situation arouses much controversy among people with different perspective and background.
Some people may hold the opinion that celebration and joyoce time is independent of the humans old and everyone could be participate and experience equal happiness. Others, on the other hand, have negative attitude toward it. As far as I am concerned, I agree that the younger people pay more attention to the celebrations for example for the athletes in comparison to the older people. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.
In the fiers place, the most important reason for me to choose this position is that the younger people have much energy to expense it during these celebrities. it goes without saying that, human during the aging lose its energy day by day. In another word the physical aspects of the humans reveals that the younger people has further energy and it makes them to take patr in more activities in contrast to the older peoples. For example, take a personal experience as an example. when I was in high school I used to go to the basketball match of our city and follow their plays until the end of the season. and one time they achived the first palce in our county, Kurdistan we toke part in their celebrities and i remembered the participant in this celebrity were apparent the young people and there were many bustle event that only the young people can create it.
In the second place, that deserves some words here, the young people suffered scant arduous problems and they still far from the spacious situation they will experience in their life. futhermore, the activities such as jobs and paying attention to the family cost much time for the older people and prevents them to even having time to take part in celebrities freely. for instance, the older people want to be at home and watch celebrities in home rather than going out and watch it
In conclusion, taking all of this points into account. I conclude that, the young people more take part in the celebrities and it is more important activities for them in contrast to the older peoples. Not only the young people have plentiful energy to expence it in such activities but also they have no important difficulties in their life and have more time to attend thiese celebrities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in contrast to, in the second place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2072.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82983682984 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59535939173 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503496503497 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 658.8 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.6408215272 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.882352941 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2352941176 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64705882353 5.45110844103 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286649715864 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101686343897 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137105622625 0.0737576698707 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151630223182 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147089989153 0.0645574589148 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.