Nowadays, human being faces with a intricate interaction in different kind of societies between different parts, both in developed and developing countries. This fact brings up a controversial question: how should a person, especially young peaple, manage to better future? should they be able to plan and organize in such complex society or the ability to plan is not that essentioal? No one deny that there are lots of abilities and skills needed in modern life and the ability to plan is just one of them. If I were asked to choosed one skill and consider it on top of my priority list, I will definitely choose to learn and know about organizing. It is my firm stand that young people who are going to confront a ton of action and reaction in modern complex socity should know how to organize for optimum outcom in their life. I believe so for a number of reasons which I will develope in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, I think that anyone should have a thorough knowledge in his/her life. In the modern society many aspect of a society such as economy, social life, politict, etc affect on each other, and as these interactions grow it would be more difficult to know the mechanism behind them. Therefore, young people who want to be successful in their economic aspect of life should also know about how the economy affected by other aspects and also how economy effect other facet of life. And in order to be able to analyze all these influences one should know how to plan and organize the priority for his/her future. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter is profoundly influenced by my own personal experiences. I remember when I was in university and want to start a kind of small business. If I have never thougt about what do I want to do as my career in future I would never choose a proper business to start and after a while I had to change it and start over. So it is really important to know what are your priorites in your life and to do that in a complex moder society one should definitely know how to plan.
Second, knowing how to organize your life make you confident in what you are doing, and psyclogically it is a kind of relief. In modern societies being uder crushing stress is one the main concern for human being, and this comes from the fact that the person who is under pressure does not know about his future. So if there is a concrete plan and organization in life there is no place for extra stress, which cause lots of desease in modern societies. Of course this is more common in developing countries where economy is not well developed and cannot garranty future of young people. But even in those reigons young people can overcome this by understanding their capabiliteis and develop a good plan accordingly.
In the light of afformentioned reason, It is my strong believe that the ability for planning and organizing, will help young people to have a better future in modern and complex society which is common almost all over the world.
- People work because they need money to live What are some other reasons that people work Discuss one or more of these reasons Use specific examples and details to support your answer 78
- Because modern life is very complex it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize 73
- People work because they need money to live What are some other reasons that people work Discuss one or more of these reasons Use specific examples and details to support your answer
- Some parents offer their school age children money for each high grade mark they get in school Do you think this is a good idea 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, really, second, so, therefore, well, while, i think, kind of, of course, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 52.1666666667 155% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2463.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 539.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56957328386 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81833721656 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56091251235 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450834879406 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 803.7 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.8572850882 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.285714286 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314608688097 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994177264573 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861477166202 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234107680779 0.150856017488 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474542423331 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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