Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
There is no shortage of opinions that it is not essential for youth to be organized and well-planned. I have a different opinion.I strongly believe that the young people must be systematized in order to live a successful life in this modern era.In the following essay, I intended to put forth my points and reasons for support.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that if our younger generation utilize their precious time in a systematic way, they will be more productive. Moreover, when they have this ability of doing assigned tasks in a timely manner, they will be more focused on their studies like submitting assignments on time. As a result, they will perform extraordinarily in the academics which in turn give them better job opportunities.To exemplify, one of my perhigh school colleague always struggles with his assignments and exam preparations due to lack of organization. However, when he discusses his issue with me, I recommend him to plan all the work ahead of time in a proper way.Evidently, as he applied my advice, his grades have taken a drastic shift and now he is a top notch dentist. Therefore, this example illustrates how managing stuff is important in this fast paced lifestyle.
Secondly, to explain broadly, when a new generation doesn't have the capability of doing work in a sequence, they may develop an imbalance in their social and professional life. Consequently, they become depressed and stressed out because they don't have any time to socialize. Eventually, they lose their sincere friends and become distant from their family. For instance, it is best explained by my own personal experience, when I started my job I failed to handle my work and family equilibrium. As a consequence, I suffer from severe anxiety and depression.Thus, this experience taught me that if I had tackled my life in an organized way then I would not have gone through that rough patch of my life as these modern times are more complicated than the older ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95820895522 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03412535753 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608955223881 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.0703006455 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.416666667 100.406767564 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9166666667 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 5.45110844103 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180965773891 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623370846289 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622197844215 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139158119329 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082007190519 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.