Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people argue that it is important for young people to plan and organize their life, while others think it is okay to live without planing. However, I personally agree with the statement that planing our lives is essential due to the complexity of modern life. There are several reasons why I feel this way which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, some people think that it is time saving when you know what to do everyday and those who with organized plans are easier to success. My friend, Allen is a compelling example of this. When he was a student in university, he planned everyday schedule and always know himself what to do next. Knowing what to do next really helped him to save time, because he would always have a direction and could be prepared anytime. For example, due to the schedule he organized, he could preview his study materials before classes, and always got higher scores.
Furthermore, people are more happier when they have abilities to plan and organize their lives. Because in the modern world, people live in a high pace and intense schedule, so if they can control their lives, they would be more relieved. On the other hand, if people do not organize themselves they might get mental problems. For instance, two years ago, I worked in an advertising company and usually had a very tight schedule but I was lazy to plan what to did next. Therefore, I was always scolded by my manager who always asked me to hand in files as quickly as possible. Day by day, I was extremely exhausted by being blamed and lived in a messy workdays, and then I got depression. I cried all day and felt sad every moment. If I could plan for my job, I might not get depression.
In conclusion, I agree with that it is essential for young people to plan and organize their lives in modern times. This is because planing helps them to save time and helps them to stay mental healthy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...is time saving when you know what to do everyday and those who with organized plans are ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 25, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
...gher scores. Furthermore, people are more happier when they have abilities to plan and or...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 653, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'workday'?
Suggestion: workday
...ed by being blamed and lived in a messy workdays, and then I got depression. I cried all...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, really, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, you know, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5549132948 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41165185846 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537572254335 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6085236199 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5555555556 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304145142119 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926462764222 0.076458572812 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877265726453 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196485952856 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651010520958 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.