Being dishonest is ok sometimes
Needless to say, lying is one of the most revolting traits among people. As telling lies can be sweet since it gives you what you want, it brings too many disadvantages for any situation, say in a work environment to family and friendships. In my opinion, verbal dishonesty has no excuse, as it clearly can be destructive in many aspects, which I will discuss two of them.
Firstly, lies can be poisonous to relationships. One of the foundations of a thriving relationship between two parties is honesty. My personal experience provided me an enduring lesson of always telling the truth, or your words can wipe out years of trust. Years ago, when I was in high school, I was invited to a school party from one of my close friends. At that time, I was really introverted, so I did not enjoy parties in general, but my friend kept on bragging about this party that I could not resist. So, I asked my parents for permission, but they did not want me to go to that party for they were strict. So, I had to find another way to sneak my way out of my house. On the night of the event, I said that I feel sick and I went to bed early. Then I changed and used the window to get out of my room. I asked one of my friends to give me a ride to the party. But later that night, my mother came to my place to check up on me, and she found an empty bed with a widely open window. So, they were looking for me while being worried. After a while, they reached out to me by one of my friends and came to the party to pick me up. I never forget the disappointment in the faces that night. Had I not lied that not, I would have been able to keep my parents' trust, but by then, it was a lost cause.
Secondly, many people believe that telling lies will bring about more lies in society. As many people lie in different circumstances, more are willing to take the same approach, but the most notable victims of this behavior are probably children. As for adults, it is somehow convenient to cast out some lies, but children cannot understand the difference between moral and wrong behavior. They find lies as a way of achieving something, and they tend to use it more often. For example, my sister had the habit of avoiding telephone calls. So, whenever she had a call, she would ask my little sister, who was four at that time, to tell the other side of the phone that she is not available. My little sister found this act contradicting, but after a while, she thought it is okay to say things that are not precisely accurate. Thus, these thoughts led to her lying to our parents about the amount of time she had spent on the computer daily or the fact that she had eaten all the chips in the kitchen. Children are fast learners, even if it is learning something negative.
All in all, I think dishonesty has more drawbacks than most people believe. As it is the promotion of more lies throughout society, it can be the death of many friendships. I think there are other ways to evade not telling the truth; Such as silence or using better vocabulary in describing an undesirable situation. If you want not to give your opinion on a case, it is better to change the subject rather than using false words.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, as for, for example, i feel, i think, in general, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 89.0 43.0788530466 207% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 84.0 52.1666666667 161% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2592.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 602.0 407.700716846 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30564784053 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.95335121839 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48478999121 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 298.0 212.727598566 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495016611296 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 807.3 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 25.0 9.59856630824 260% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 10.0 1.86738351254 536% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1696619155 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6129032258 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4193548387 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90322580645 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.85842293907 415% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0372398363208 0.236089414692 16% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0134438288654 0.076458572812 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318081592286 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0323476925245 0.150856017488 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025318788396 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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