The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.
Creativity is a mean of doing artworks. Some may argue that it is a hard process and must be done by geniouses. But when you come to analyze that, you realize that the source of their inspiration is somewhat simple and commonplace. I would like to elaborate my answer by two reasons.
First, designers are people who understands people's needs and think of better ways to respond them. Their inspirations, however, are from ordinary happenings surrounding us from our ordinary lives. Take spoon for example, it has a simple design, however it meets our needs perfectly. For instance, when someone goes to a restaurant, they would found different set of spoons simillar to their orders. If they order soup, they would have to have it by a rather larger spoon with deeper basin in order to maintain a large amount of liquid mixture to seap in one round. Another example would be tea spoon, that is more delicate and lesser capacity to hold hot tea or hold small amount of sugar to add to beverages. You could see that these designs may look simple, but they actualy fullfil our needs efficiently.
Second, famous writers usually have a well written books that attracts lots of people. They maybe write simply, but their ture masterpices are the concept and the phelosephy they put in their works. Take Charles Dickens for instance. He is a great writer who lived in The United Kingdom around 18th century. He raised by a poor family and endures many toils and hardships in his life. Therefore he was completely aware of the harsh situation of his society. He wrote many books to critisize the cruel situation of the poor in his era, and his books went viral. Many people of all over the world read his book and symphathised with his characters, since he wrote them very distinctly and believable. I read most of his books many years ago, like Oliver Twist, David Copperfield, Great Expectations and many other of his works, and I really in love with his works and remmember them vividly. It's like I once lived with those characters and have memories with them. That's a simple example of how common and tangible experiences could inspire great artists to create magnificent works.
Creating is a mystorious process that some may think it is impossible to do. But as I mentioned with examples, it is not as hard as people think it is. The inspirations for masterpieces are everywhere in plane sight. Whether it is designing an insignificant spoon, or to write a life-changing novel. Those who like to make a differance by creating novel things, should watch their surroundings with more care and attentions. The next inspiration for an innovative artwork may lie somewhere near them without noticing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...y is a mean of doing artworks. Some may argue that it is a hard process and must be d...
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Line 3, column 385, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...s many toils and hardships in his life. Therefore he was completely aware of the harsh si...
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Line 3, column 963, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...characters and have memories with them. Thats a simple example of how common and tang...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, really, second, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2237.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 464.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82112068966 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66731211456 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556034482759 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 693.9 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9275306593 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8928571429 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0199006413631 0.236089414692 8% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00520012995794 0.076458572812 7% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0199842553137 0.0737576698707 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0124163246636 0.150856017488 8% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0126504255213 0.0645574589148 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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