The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A glance at people's attitude toward lifestyle brings to the light a question, namely, whether spend time lonely is the best way to relax and reduce stress. Many people hold the idea that spending time in solitary is the greatest way to overcome stress and chill out. However, others stay on the other side of the continuum, believing that spending time with friends can be a better way to decrease stress levels. As far as I am concerned I am of the last group, I am going to demonstrate my notion in the followings.
To commence with, it is overthinking that can be a sheer result of solitute especially when we face some serious problems. Nowadays there are wide varieties of issues affecting people's life. All which issues have a profound impact on our thinking, obsession and stress level. It is crystal clear, The bigger problem is, the more our stress level increase. when people get alone, there is a considerable trend among individuals to overthink about issue faced, trying to solve it. Consequently, their stress level increased in opposit way intented. As a tangble example, my uncle used to live alone for long time. As he faced with job security problem during the middle age time, he becamed obsessed with that very problem because of solitute, resulting in increasing stress level, anxiety, anger, overthinking, and depression level, To name but a few. Had not live alone, he would not get obsessed with overthinking about job insecurity problem.
The another vital issue to consider, admittedly, It is spending time with friends and family member that can relive stress and be relaxing compared to spend time alone. To put it in other worls, when people spend their time with friends they can unwind, stop thinking of that very problem faced. or even get gret peace of advise to tackle the issue. THe more people spend their time with their friends, The more their spiritual level wil augment. An example of mine can drive this notion home. When I lived in a dormitory during the time I was a student, I used to spend my time with my friends, talking to them specially when I was under a gret pressure, could make me unwind and decreasing my stress level, which has a great implications on my overall well-being's. Had not lived in a dormitory or busy environment, I would have serious problem due to my high anxiety stress level.
Considering all examples and reasons, I am deeply belive that spending time alone is not the best way to decrease stress level and relaxing. Not only can it increase stress level by overthinking, but also it will lose the chance of being with friend or family members.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2341.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 486.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81687242798 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5538892071 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506172839506 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 731.7 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3825854479 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.64 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.44 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84 5.45110844103 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378375620612 0.236089414692 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119222807959 0.076458572812 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176097961906 0.0737576698707 239% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246929735165 0.150856017488 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.258567569762 0.0645574589148 401% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.