Living among modern era have been affected people lifestyle and increase their pressure as they are living in the hectic daily life scaduales. There are different ways to lessen the abounding of stress and making your life happier and grateful. Some people believes that stay in a privet environment and being alone is an effective method to release stress. However, others disagree. As far as I am concern there are other efficient fashions to get rid of the stress. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following.
First and foremost, the most valuable and crucial role of physical activities like sport and gym is to release stress. In other words, scientist believe that having specific amounts of physical activity directly effect on your mental health and help people to feel calm. The recent study that have been conducted on researches presents that the the best use of exercise is to decrease pressures and increase your mental health by increasing the significant amounts of protein in your body. accordingly, the more exercise does every body each days, the better healthy mind does they make. If people are under lots of pressures, exercise will make their body relax and give them sense of satisfaction.
Second important way to mitigate stress is to having a connection of friendship which are the best one to speak about the problems and give prominent advice. In fact, friends are the people who are familiar with your treatment and are so close to convince and comprehend the problems that makes you upset. One of my own experience is a good case in point. I was remembering that I got stuck into the tremendous amounts of problems which cause feel stress. I was living alone in a far distance of city which nobody could come and help me. I was wondered If I had a real close friend to share my problem and gave some advice to mitigate the pressures that I had been got stuck on that. In that case I was just set at home for few days and make my mind to help my bad feeling and substitute the condition. However, as I am a controversy and need to meet some body to feel better, By setting alone in the home I just increase the stress in my body. because I just think and think and never could get rid of my challenges.
In conclusion, I strongly disagree that setting alone in the home can help human to feel better and release their extent of stress. I believe that having physical activity like daily exercise and having a friendship communication would be more influence on mitigating the stress.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statements Because people are busy doing so many different things they do very few things well Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, however, if, second, so, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2096.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66815144766 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51768906744 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476614699332 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 668.7 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3393785013 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2727272727 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4090909091 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13636363636 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132755113942 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404054633375 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424690154345 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088948952078 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292111584843 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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